English Writing - 19

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

I think parents are one of the best teachers for kids. Even if these kids grow up, those parents will still be good teachers. There are many reasons, but most importantly, they love their kids and want to give everything to them. First, every parent Parent wants to give their love and their attention to their kids. For this reason, parents usually teach something to kids in a good way. Most of them could be calm and patient. So kids can learn more easily. Second, parents are usually aware of their kid's interests. So they can Can give them any kind of support. Such as reading books, playing soccer, or listening to music Books, Playing soccer, or Listening to Music to find new knowledge with them. Third, parents think that teaching their kids is delightful. It is so important. Parents will not get not be exhausted. They can teach again and again until their kids would understand. In conclusion, I agree that parents are the best teachers. No one is a better teacher than parents.

You've managed to do an excellent job with the development and the organization for this writing, but you've made the same mistake repeatedly. The mistake was capitalization error. You shouldn't capitalize words in the middle of a sentence in English. (Unless it is a proper noun.) Be careful of this in the next writing! Amazing job!