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Date: 09/20/2023 ================ Student:Dawoon Topic:UK Company Catches Microplastics from Car Tires https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/uk-company-catches-microplastics-from-car-tires/5KwWyjCCEe2-dsNhfL76yA Sentence Construction: X I think EV technology should be developed like researchers it is not enough now, there are so many powers now and since this reason so many companies didn’t m..

Date: 09/19/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic:Russia gives Kim Jong Un an inside look at its warplanes and frigates https://edition.cnn.com/2023/09/15/asia/kim-jong-un-north-korea-impressed-by-russia-aircraft-intl-hnk/index.html Sentence Construction: X I went home 10:30 today. I have so many tasks.>> I went home at 10:30 today. I have so many tasks. X In Chuseok I should go to the oth..

Date: 09/18/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic:Two Arrested for Digging Through Great Wall of China https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/two-arrested-for-digging-through-great-wall-of-china/VgYd-FCYEe6naefxGCUY6A Sentence Construction: X Not only important but they were, they could go around the wall in construction site but they didn’t.>> Not only were they important but they were,..

Date: 09/15/2023 ================= Student: Dawoon Topic:Pong: The Start of a Gaming Revolution https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/pong-the-start-of-a-gaming-revolution/maWL1ADKEe6uS7fH0liUqQ Sentence Construction: X I think I seems like I play this game.>>It seems like I play this game. X I have some memory I saw that.>> I have some memories of when I saw that. X I and my friends had some..

Date: 09/14/2023 ================= Student: Dawoon Topic: Mystery of radioactivity of Germany's wild boars https://breakingnewsenglish.com/2309/230904-radioactive-wild-boars-5.html Sentence Construction: X I’m so sorry about that.>> I feel sorry about that. X Country people think are same but some politician think different I think.>> Country people think the same but some politicians think diff..

Date: 09/13/2023 ================= Student: Dawoon Topic:Pen Pals of 68 Years Meet for First Time in America https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/pen-pals-of-68-years-meet-for-first-time-in-america/TMUVKkdPEe6bFlfMozxHBA Sentence Construction: X It is my business trip.>> It was my business trip. X I didn’t keep this.>> I didn’t keep the communications. X Every day I wrote comment to the read..

Date: 09/08/2023 ================= Student: Dawoon Topic:FIFA suspends Spain coach over unwanted kiss https://breakingnewsenglish.com/2308/230828-womens-world-cup-5.html Sentence Construction: X I saw that on phone so I was shocked.>> I saw that on the phone so I was shocked. X They are not familiar with.>> They don’t have any relationship. X What I saying is Spanish football official people had..

Date: 09/05/2023 ================= Student: Dawoon Topic: The inevitable rise of #worktok https://www.bbc.com/worklife/article/20230829-the-inevitable-rise-of-worktok Sentence Construction: X Someone who want to promoting their job.>> Someone who wants to promote their job. X Traditional advertising market need celebrity I think in youtuber they use only their employee.>> Traditional advertising..

Date: 09/05/2023 ================= Student: Dawoon Topic: The inevitable rise of #worktok https://www.bbc.com/worklife/article/20230829-the-inevitable-rise-of-worktok The inevitable rise of #worktokWhen work is life, and life is social media, it only makes sense that workplace discourse is thriving alongside make-up routines and viral dance videos.www.bbc.com Sentence Construction: X Someone who..

Date: 09/04/2023 = ================ Student: Dawoon Topic: ‘Gender apartheid’: UN experts denounce Iran’s proposed hijab law https://edition.cnn.com/2023/09/01/middleeast/united-nations-calls-iran-hijab-gender-apartheid-intl-hnk/index.html 'Gender apartheid': UN experts denounce Iran's proposed hijab law | CNNCNN — A new draft law that would enshrine harsh punishments for women and girls who fai..