English Writing - 23

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

 

I agree with this statement. Nowadays, mass media usually focuses on celebrities's individual lives. It is a kind of social problem.

First, many people have killed themselves after the media revealed their private lives to the people. Some reporters intentionally wrote articles about a famous person for their promotion.

Second, many politicians tried to push the media to change the people's attention, when they had critical problems. and then in this case the victim is one of the famous people.

In conclusion, I agree with this statement. and this kind of culture should be disappeared.

 

Again, like the writing before this one, the organization regarding the topic was perfect. However, there seemed to be only topic sentences in your writing and not much details. You should give examples of your topic sentences. Try it in your next writing! Keep up the good work!