English Writing - 21

Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

 

I think it is better to learn from a teacher than learning yourself. Of course, some geniuses can learn themselves properly. But most of us are not geniuses. First of all, there are many obstacles in the learning path. So if you can follow a pioneer, you can find the right path easily. At this point, a teacher is like a guide who can give you good hints to get a goal. Second, the emotion that you can feel when you study yourself can make you want to quit learning by yourself because studying alone is very lonely. drop off that learning yourself. Because studying alone is so lonely. Third, if you don't attend the class with a teacher, you may not know what is the next step in that subject. It is so important. even if you want to learn more deeply, you might lose your path. In conclusion I believe that learning from a teacher is always better than learning yourself.

 

Great job stating your ideas regarding this topic You do have good ideas and the organization and the development is good, but I think it would be better if you could add one or two more sentences in your body paragraphs. Anyways, great job!