English Writing - 26

People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.

 

I think making money is the most important reason why people work. But there are other reasons also. Some people work to reach their dreams. the other people work for their happiness. First, some people People do their jobs to achieve their goals. Many singers make their songs to make their fans happy. And some businessman makes new inventions to make people more comfortable. Second, some people work for only their satisfaction. Many monks support temples and they can achieve their happiness. In conclusion, I think there are a lot of reasons to work without money.

 

In this writing, you've made a lot of capitalization mistakes. Be sure to capitalize the first letter in the beginning of a sentence and in the middle of a sentence, you need to put the word in lower case unless it is a proper noun. I would also like for you to add a bit more detail to your writing. Keep up the good work!