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If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. [Drafting] If I could change only one thing about my hometown, I want to change the road system to be more human-friendly for the resident's health. first, lacking a walk side affects the resident's health more harm. So expanding walk path is more helpful ..

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. [Drafting] Studying science and mathematics is more important than studying history and literature as students. Because history and literature can be one hobby, but..

Date: 12/14/2023 ================ Student:Dawoon Topic: Study: Video Games Don't Affect Cognition in Children https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/study-video-games-dont-affect-cognition-in-children/kvl2xIe2Ee6hVkPtH1AXeA Sentence Construction: X I love computer cafe but I went to school.>> I love computer cafes but I went to school. X Nowaday, people have their computers at home.>> Nowadays..

Date: 12/12/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic: Influencers, Phones: How People Shop in the US https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/influencers-phones-how-people-shop-in-the-us/RGbjnnGkEe2ZrHPkneT7iA Sentence Construction: X I just click by my mouse in my house.>> I just click on my mouse at my house. X This is a Christmas season.>> This is the Christmas season. X In advertisement t..

Date: 12/11/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic: Russia’s Vladimir Putin says he will run for president again in 2024 election https://edition.cnn.com/2023/12/08/europe/putin-president-election-2024-intl/index.html Sentence Construction: X Russia is not democracy.>> Russia is not a democratic country. X There are these countries power so low.>> These countries' power is so low. X Russian..

Date: 12/08/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic: 'It's Hot!' Talking Parrot Saves French Couple from Fire https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/its-hot-talking-parrot-saves-french-couple-from-fire/yVOyeImdEe62chcqmi7_GA Sentence Construction: X Parrots like warm condition, warm temperature.>>Parrots like warm temperatures. X Philippine is very warm.>> The Philippines is warm. X They w..

Date: 12/07/2023 ================ Student:Dawoon Topic: Scientists hopeful of cure for itchiness and eczema https://breakingnewsenglish.com/2311/231130-eczema-cure.html Sentence Construction: X I went to home from outside.>> I went home from outside. X My wife have allergy about cat hair.>> My wife has an allergy to cat hair. X She didn’t breathe properly.>> She couldn’t breathe properly. Pronun..

Date: 12/06/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic: Write Well: How a Diary Can Improve Your Mental Health https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/write-well-how-a-diary-can-improve-your-mental-health/RmgKaoorEe6UxatZQrS41w Sentence Construction: X On of the shock news is young people use voice generated service.>> One piece of shocking news is that young people use voice generated service..

Date: 12/05/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic: Why Americans' 'YOLO' spending spree baffles economists https://www.bbc.com/worklife/article/20231130-why-americans-yolo-spending-attitude-baffles-economists Sentence Construction: X Nobody listen to my voice.>> Nobody listens to my voice. X They don’t have money to buy something enough.>> They don’t have enough money to buy anything. X Th..

Student: Dawoon Topic:The major factors driving up the prices of US wine https://www.bbc.com/worklife/article/20231121-how-us-wine-became-so-expensive The major factors driving up the prices of US wine American consumers are experiencing sticker shock for domestic wines. How did US bottles get so expensive? www.bbc.com Sentence Construction: X I’m not enjoy drinking alcohol.>> I don’t enjoy drin..