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Grades encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. [Drafting] I can't entirely agree that grades encourage students to learn because grading student's performance makes students to be consequentialist. I can't entirely agree that grades encourage students to learn because grading student's performance makes students to be consequentialist. firstly, if ..

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. [Drafting] This topic is challenging, but money is not the most important thing to get a job because getting money is just a result, not a cause. Interesting is the most important thing to get a job. a person who is inter..

-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. [Drafting] In my opinion, Children should help with household tasks as soon as possible because this kind of work is not only learning how to clean the house but also learning how to live with..

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. [Drafting] I believe that in high school, students should be allowed to take the classes they want. From the time they graduate high school, they are adults and this is their last period of preparati..

If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. [Drafting] If I could change only one thing about my hometown, I want to change the road system to be more human-friendly for the resident's health. first, lacking a walk side affects the resident's health more harm. So expanding walk path is more helpful ..

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. [Drafting] Studying science and mathematics is more important than studying history and literature as students. Because history and literature can be one hobby, but..

Date: 12/14/2023 ================ Student:Dawoon Topic: Study: Video Games Don't Affect Cognition in Children https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/study-video-games-dont-affect-cognition-in-children/kvl2xIe2Ee6hVkPtH1AXeA Sentence Construction: X I love computer cafe but I went to school.>> I love computer cafes but I went to school. X Nowaday, people have their computers at home.>> Nowadays..

Date: 12/12/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic: Influencers, Phones: How People Shop in the US https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/influencers-phones-how-people-shop-in-the-us/RGbjnnGkEe2ZrHPkneT7iA Sentence Construction: X I just click by my mouse in my house.>> I just click on my mouse at my house. X This is a Christmas season.>> This is the Christmas season. X In advertisement t..

Date: 12/11/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic: Russia’s Vladimir Putin says he will run for president again in 2024 election https://edition.cnn.com/2023/12/08/europe/putin-president-election-2024-intl/index.html Sentence Construction: X Russia is not democracy.>> Russia is not a democratic country. X There are these countries power so low.>> These countries' power is so low. X Russian..

Date: 12/08/2023 ================ Student: Dawoon Topic: 'It's Hot!' Talking Parrot Saves French Couple from Fire https://engoo.com/app/daily-news/article/its-hot-talking-parrot-saves-french-couple-from-fire/yVOyeImdEe62chcqmi7_GA Sentence Construction: X Parrots like warm condition, warm temperature.>>Parrots like warm temperatures. X Philippine is very warm.>> The Philippines is warm. X They w..